I recieved feedback from my teacher and they suggested that I move the main image from the centre to the right hand side. After doing this, I thought it looked better than my original cover so decided to keep it this way. My masthead now looks better now the image is in this position and the coverlines look more professional on the left hand side of the page. As well as this, the target audience are more likely to see the coverlines as magazine are stacked on the shelf so the left hand side of the text can be seen. I have also moved the poster special to the bottom left hand side of the page so the top half looks less cluttered. I think that these changes cause my magazine to look a lot more professional and expensive.
I have changed the contrast of the photograph to appear brighter and more vivid which I think has worked sucessfully. I have made the coverlines larger so they fill the space more effectively. I have rotated the words 'Cora Jagger Poster Special' so they fit with the feel of the special better. As well as this, I have put the price of the magazine in the top right hand corner of the text so it can easily be seen by the target audience.
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